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~K
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0 posted 2002-11-11 03:23 AM



Come closer
I feel your edges
dance back

Time reflects
the anchor
of our folly

the misdirected
essence of our
moment wasted

and played
out Time
& Time again

we turn away
under the constellation
of our unsatiated souls

Chaos

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1 posted 2002-11-11 05:25 AM


interesting piece. I can't quite put my finger on it...but it is interesting.
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2 posted 2002-11-11 10:49 AM


~K

Liked the title..... and, oh those patterns, so hard to break!

Liked this a lot.

Warm Regards,
Pat

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3 posted 2002-11-11 03:45 PM




(sigh) Oh K, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love the wonderful imagery you throw out in this piece like a Salvador Dali masterpiece! (smiles) This is fabulous, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet K, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

~K
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4 posted 2002-11-11 03:50 PM


Thank you wonderful people! You make writing poetry fun again!
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