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Sweetpoet16m4u04
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0 posted 2002-11-10 10:24 PM


Goodbye’s


Goodbye’s are always the hardest things to say
You just meet someone new and call him or her a friend
Before you know it they have gone away,
And what used to be the beginning has quickly became the end.


Why are these words so hard to say, you ask?
When only you want to see it last
Nobody wants to see all the tears,
You want this friendship to grow year after year.


This weekend is now winding down
Please do me a favor and don’t frown.
We both know we may never see each other again,
But we also know we don’t want this to end.


So I guess I have to say it now
Although it means so much pain and sorrow
When you know everybody will be gone tomorrow
This sad and meaningful word Goodbye!

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1 posted 2002-11-10 11:55 PM




(big hugggsssssss) I know how hard it must feel to say goodbye and I nsend angel hugs of strength and comfort your way in hope you can say it and also feel comfortable knowing these memories can never change, God Bless You, my heart goes out to you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-11-11 12:01 PM


Sweetpoet,

Goodbyes are indeed extremely hard to say. I rarely say that word. I enjoyed this poem. A belated welcome to Pip to you.

                           Dawn

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3 posted 2002-11-11 12:25 PM


that's why I always say... See ya later

I liked this!

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4 posted 2002-11-11 12:34 PM


I hate the word "goodbye", too. It seems so final. We never know what the future holds when we say goodbye to someone.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

Robert Adamson
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5 posted 2002-11-11 04:06 AM


Yeah, goodbye is not easy. I like the way you get to it in this poem. Thank you.


etoodog

[This message has been edited by Robert Adamson (11-11-2002 04:07 AM).]

Sweetpoet16m4u04
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6 posted 2002-11-11 04:53 PM


I'm really glad all of you enjoyed this poem. I know that alot of you can relate to it in different ways thats for sure. Thanks for all the comments they are greatly appreciated.

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7 posted 2006-11-09 05:04 PM


Hey I really like this poem of yours.
I actually had to say good-bye to some of my friends, when they had left our memories behind. But I know how you must feel. I hope to see more from you in the future. Thanks for sharing with us Chris.
                 Courtney

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