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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-11-10 09:27 PM

Two Twisted Lovers

evening adorns herself
in sensual best
black velvet gown
in elegance dressed
beauty on the breeze
desire rides its flight
alluring in enchantments
fragrance of night
the mystery of her
impresses the man in the moon
his intentions are full shown
her name is his tune
the moon and its pull
has such gentle ways
evening invokes his presence
there he stays
where evening is found
the moon is never far
with magic of his hand
appears the best of the stars
such is the romantic story
of two tangled lovers
time weaves them together
and they sigh for the other

I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you.

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2002-11-10 09:37 PM

Very beautiful Helen..
Much enjoyed the read this evening..
~Hugs~

~Let your heart guide you...
It whispers so listen closely~

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-11-10 09:47 PM

Such a beautiful poem

Cold hands means a warm heart

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

3 posted 2002-11-10 10:00 PM

Helen! I love this! (it must go in the book, too) smiling....

This is special and creative. The title caused me to expect something much different.

Enjoyed much and went back to re-read a few more times. I like it...Nice!

Warm Regards,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2002-11-10 10:07 PM

Helen, I love the way you write. It's so soothing and song-like. Thanks for sharing with us,

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2002-11-10 10:25 PM

Well I'm sighing for this poem...so beautiful and uniquely said, Helen

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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