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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2002-11-10 08:55 PM



There is the landscape of dreams
pure, simple, beautiful
in it's innocent state of mind,
where pictures play on screen
of thought, while restless
tossing and turning disturbs
not the adventure of night.

The lay of land dictated by my
subconscious thought, each landmark
created within fantasy daze, haze
of dream, world surreal in sleep.

Within this, my deepest of mind,
as the moon watches through slit
of blind, I find, images of color
small picture shows playing, and

replaying, sometimes with horrid
representation of life, though often
a jaunt into sweet lust, felt upon
body through sheer veil of dream.

A landscape seen somewhere in pause
of mind, that saves the pictures
I never see, and paints them upon
my sleeping thoughts.

Dreams that oftimes I cannot
describe, nor keep in mind upon
awaken, shaken I hope to capture
pieces to put together the puzzle
when fog of limbo is past, and the
day has found me pondering the
night spent in places I cannot recall.

This mysterious landscape, does escape
my grasp as word described, so it is
with fingers shamed by lack of recollect
that I offer only this mere peek,
a far off view, of the landscape of

my dreams...

WhiteRose 11/10/02


"my reflection becomes me"

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (11-10-2002 08:56 PM).]

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-11-10 08:56 PM


This has such beautiful imagery.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-11-11 12:00 PM




(smiles) Oh Anne, this is beautiful, sweet friend, and may every thought you express reveal more of that special puzzle to you! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-11-11 12:11 PM


Anne,

This is very beautiful. Every time I read one of your poems, I cannot get over how much you look like someone I know. LOL. I think you have a twin in Illinois.

                               Dawm

Larry C
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4 posted 2002-11-11 12:43 PM


Anne,
Well now, I have been to that very place. But you described it far better than I ever could. Well done.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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5 posted 2002-11-11 01:03 AM


Anne, you described the landscape of your dreams very well. I enjoyed your poem a lot. Thanks for sharing.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

Robert Adamson
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6 posted 2002-11-11 03:45 AM


I enjoyed the tapestry of the dreams you write about here.

etoodog

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