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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-11-10 06:55 PM


Tonight I sit at the computer
Thinking about how lonely I am
I have nobody to talk to
No TV to watch until 8

I am so bored
As I wait on messenger
For someone to talk to
But nobody shows up
Except Liam for a split second
While I was doing chores
Come to find out

I hate being alone
But I survive
I live on
In this lonely state
This lonely state of mind

Cold hands means a warm heart

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regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940
California
1 posted 2002-11-10 07:02 PM



There you go again, capturing a simple, little moment in time which we all go through sometimes, and I can certainly relate to. (Least you have Liam, lucky girl!) smiling.....

Warm Regards,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
2 posted 2002-11-10 07:08 PM


Yea... it's those moments that give me my ultimate strength.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-11-10 07:32 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Julie, I'm so sorry you've had to endure all this lately, sweet friend, rest assured that this time will pass and you will find all the joy your heart desires, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Wind
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4 posted 2002-11-10 07:38 PM


Sorry about your lonelyness. Here is one of my lonely posts /pip/Forum74/HTML/001518.html Sigh....

"Sticks and stones will break my bones,
But words will break my heart"

garysgirl
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5 posted 2002-11-10 11:51 PM


Julie, I'm so sorry that your feeling this way. I have Gary, but because he's not right here with me all the time, I get very lonely sometimes. Even if I'm in a crowded room full of my friends, I still get lonely when Gary isn't right there with me.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

Robert Adamson
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since 2002-10-21
Posts 328
PA/USA
6 posted 2002-11-11 04:53 AM


I think you capture loneliness well. I like the way you link the lack of people around you to this important feeling. Thank you.


etoodog

[This message has been edited by Robert Adamson (11-11-2002 04:54 AM).]

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