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Lovemaking Comes in Many Forms

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Auguste
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0 posted 11-10-2002 05:46 PM       View Profile for Auguste   Email Auguste   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Auguste's Home Page   View IP for Auguste


Her voice is softly dripping rain,
her passion, that of lightning glow,
her hair, the scent of autumn leaves.
Such beauty, rare, Iíve come to know.

Her eyes, green pools of liquid light,
like moth, Iím drawn into their gaze.
She keeps in trust each word we speak.
I love her in so many ways.

The windows fog, this night of chill,
as amber fire paints body, bare.
A glass of wine, a quilt on floor,
in front of fireplace we will share.

Though hearts beat quickly on this night,
you do not rush a work of art.
Lovemaking comes in many forms,
but first, you feed her mind and heart.


© Copyright 2002 Michael Auguste - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 11-10-2002 05:56 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


Beautiful!
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2 posted 11-10-2002 05:57 PM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee


Amen to that!  Beautiful, beautiful! and so true m'friend!  I am keeping this one and framing it!  
You're a classy, sensitive man and that's something to be proud of.  You need to teach seminars in North America to ALL men!
This is a gem!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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Well. Well. Well, Michael! You never cease to amaze me, and leave me speechless. This is surely beautiful, such as your own soul must be.

Such tenderness.....

Thank you, it is quite enjoyable.

Warm Regards,
Pat   

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        "Desiderata"

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4 posted 11-10-2002 06:33 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

OOOH YESSS Michael!!
You've have penned this perfectly!!!
Exquisite write m'friend!
~Big hugs for this keeper!!~

~Let your heart guide you...
  It whispers so listen closely~

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(smiles) Oh Michael, this is so very true, sweet friend, there are so many ways but what makes a love truly special is the frequent feeding of the faithful flame! (sigh) This is so well said, swet friend, your sensitive heart always lights these pages, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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Finally, a guy who KNOWS!!!! *grins* Beautifully done

I'm so cute!

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Michael, friend, you must have given lessons to my Gary before I met him, because this is exactly what he believes, too. Thanks so much for sharing these beautiful thoughts and feelings.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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Michael

It takes time to make a work of art,
so is it with love.
Such a tender poem, my friend.

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9 posted 11-10-2002 10:42 PM       View Profile for ThisDiamond   Email ThisDiamond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ThisDiamond's Home Page   View IP for ThisDiamond

Sending champagne thoughts to both of you.
ThisDiamond
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10 posted 11-10-2002 11:08 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

this is amazing!
L~

Deep inside the stillness
........I can hear you speak
You're still an inspiration
........To me

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Thank you Michael for the lesson...you write with passion...and experience...

...believe what your heart feels...

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12 posted 11-12-2002 12:29 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

"Her voice is softly dripping rain,
her passion, that of lightning glow,
her hair, the scent of autumn leaves."


ok, you knew I'd love this part...didn't you
this is a tender write dear friend of mine, I do love this. Gonna keep it too.
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"She keeps in trust each word we speak"

very lovely writing Michael
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14 posted 11-12-2002 05:27 PM       View Profile for Auguste   Email Auguste   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Auguste's Home Page   View IP for Auguste

Karilea,
it's always nice to see a reply from you on one of my poems.  Thank you!

Melissa,
You're so sweet, I feel very complimented, even blushing. LOL!  All I've said in this poem is what every man should already have enough common sense and respect for women to know.  Thank you dearly, my friend. *hugs*

Pat,
Such a nice thing to say...thank you very much.

Nancy,
Thank you and Big HUGS back.

Noah,
"what makes a love truly special is the frequent feeding of the faithful flame"...I don't think I could've said it any better, my friend.   Thank you!

Skyfire,
Yes, I know...smiles here...thank you!

Ethel,
Gary sounds like a wonderful man.  Yes, some men do know what a woman needs and it appears that you've found one.  Thank you!

Martie,
Yes, it takes time...patience...thank you, sweetie.  *hugs*

ThisDiamond,
Thank you for the champagne and for enjoying this one.

Lauren,
Thanks for the "amazing" my friend. *hugs* to you.

scorpio,
Thank you for the nice compliment.  I see you're new here.  Welcome to our home.

Susan,
You're also a dear friend and yes, I knew if I said anything about "rain" in this poem that you would like it. LOL  Thank you and hugsss.

Maureen,
It's so nice seeing you here.  Thank you.

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