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Two Words |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon 
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It happens in the second I hear the words slip from your mouth... A mouth I know so well in warmth, in wet of kiss upon mine own. Those two little words that start each heated conversation we share... dripping with the sweet of you, onto me. "Hi baby" And I am lost in a moment gone, of when love so strong, so real enveloped us two with coccoon of time... Forever, eternal, our feelings, our feelings all summed up in two words you say so gently into my ear, and I think please might this go on until....... WhiteRose 11/10/02 "my reflection becomes me" |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Whoa!!!!!!! Where's a fan when you need one? Dang girl!!!!!!! Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo sensually beautiful, sweet friend, simple words are always the best to warm ones heart with a smile of love, this is breathtaking, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Anne, ...forever....I hope for you. This is remarkably ~precious~! Thanks for sharing it with us. Warm Regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Red Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 143Ca |
Be still my beating heart!!!!  You captured such a precious emotion beautifully!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Ms Rose, I really love this, I'm sorry I missed it and these lines really stuck with me.... A mouth I know so well in warmth, in wet of kiss and and I think please might this go on until....... yup if only. Maree |
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