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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2002-11-10 03:50 PM



I cannot create within the confines
of space predefined, by line
and placement of word upon page.

I need the entire of the landscape
without the fence of form and fit,
meter and rhyme, or lack thereof.

Miles of space for paint of picture
from mind to reader, to create a view
that I perceive to pass in verse.

From me to them, assorted colors of
shape and experience, jagged and rough
sometimes biting and slicing, who cares.

The cube you wish for me to fill
is too small, too small, and I'm
already bursting with thought
that could not be captured, caged
and placed perfect on page.

WhiteRose 11/10/02

"my reflection becomes me"

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-11-10 03:58 PM




(sigh) Oh Anne, I know just how you feel, I am not much of a form person at all and just like to write however I feel as I too have so many thoughts that couldn't possibly fill a sestina, a sonnet, a pantoum! (big hugggsssss) You speak of this so well, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
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2 posted 2002-11-10 06:59 PM


I love this poem Anne.

Cold hands means a warm heart

regards2you
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3 posted 2002-11-10 07:33 PM



Anne, You placed this one perfect on a page, as you do all others. Enjoyed this a great deal, and can definately relate.

Thank you,

Warm Regards,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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