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Sunshine
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0 posted 2002-11-10 02:51 PM



Daddy's Naked Ladies

“Come see my naked ladies,”
he laughed, a twinkle in his eye
I looked at Dad and wondered how
Mom put up with this huge lie!

He said, “They’re lovely, tall and slender,
Their faces, oh so pink!”
I wondered what he meant by that!
He really made me think!

“They started out so small and fair,
…Your mother wants them out of here!
but now they’re simply everywhere!”
No wonder Mom held back Dad's beer!

Dad, he chuckled and walked along
Down to his ladies all in pink
There we were on the front lawn
And I didn’t know what to think!

“Naked ladies?  So, where are they?”
“Why right here,” was all he said.
I looked and grinned, for he was right
Long and Slender Ladies, with blushing large Pink Heads.


    

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1 posted 2002-11-10 02:56 PM


Oh, what fun! Made me chuckle! Love the sense of humor in your family! I guess the nut didn't fall far from the tree! hehe

Linda

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2 posted 2002-11-10 02:57 PM


Karilea

My husband teases me all the time about his naked ladies.  They look just like your dads.  Thanks for the shared eye twinkle, wink.

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3 posted 2002-11-10 02:59 PM



Karilea~
This is so cute, and too funny.
Glad you brought this one out of hiding.
Hugs,
~Vicky

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4 posted 2002-11-10 04:13 PM


Ah such fond memories Karilea..
I love this...and the picture as well.
Challenge well met.
~Hugs~

~Let your heart guide you...
  It whispers so listen closely~

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5 posted 2002-11-10 04:24 PM


great title
wonderful poem
wondering if the title and topic  is appropriate for open poetry at piptalk...
gotta talk to the moderators about this
neckid ladies? wow!! yum!!!!!! sounds delicious and enticing! what? this is
about flowers? exactly! nice job...

i dig it

scorpio
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6 posted 2002-11-10 04:44 PM


Wonderful poem Karilea...much enjoyed...I loved the title...and the picture...

...believe what your heart feels...

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7 posted 2002-11-10 04:58 PM


Karilea, this is absolutely delightful. I really enjoyed it....the poem and the picture.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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8 posted 2002-11-10 05:29 PM


I loved the sense of humor in this.  Thanks for the smile!

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

Honeybee
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9 posted 2002-11-10 05:59 PM



Well you've brought sunshine to my day
It's good to be back!~

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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10 posted 2002-11-10 06:51 PM




Karilea, How clever you are.

Enjoyed this much.


Warm Regards,
Pat

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        "Desiderata"

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11 posted 2004-06-29 04:48 PM


Dad would always have me weed that area for Mom.. member all the veggies?
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12 posted 2004-07-03 11:06 AM


The naked ladies overtook Daddy's nasty-sturtiums....
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