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Daddy's Naked Ladies - for PdV's Challenge

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Sunshine
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Daddy's Naked Ladies

“Come see my naked ladies,”
he laughed, a twinkle in his eye
I looked at Dad and wondered how
Mom put up with this huge lie!

He said, “They’re lovely, tall and slender,
Their faces, oh so pink!”
I wondered what he meant by that!
He really made me think!

“They started out so small and fair,
…Your mother wants them out of here!
but now they’re simply everywhere!”
No wonder Mom held back Dad's beer!

Dad, he chuckled and walked along
Down to his ladies all in pink
There we were on the front lawn
And I didn’t know what to think!

“Naked ladies?  So, where are they?”
“Why right here,” was all he said.
I looked and grinned, for he was right
Long and Slender Ladies, with blushing large Pink Heads.


    

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (11-10-2002 02:51 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Karilea Rilling - All Rights Reserved
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Oh, what fun! Made me chuckle! Love the sense of humor in your family! I guess the nut didn't fall far from the tree! hehe

Linda
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Karilea

My husband teases me all the time about his naked ladies.  They look just like your dads.  Thanks for the shared eye twinkle, wink.
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Karilea~
This is so cute, and too funny.
Glad you brought this one out of hiding.
Hugs,
~Vicky
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Ah such fond memories Karilea..
I love this...and the picture as well.
Challenge well met.
~Hugs~

~Let your heart guide you...
  It whispers so listen closely~

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great title
wonderful poem
wondering if the title and topic  is appropriate for open poetry at piptalk...
gotta talk to the moderators about this
neckid ladies? wow!! yum!!!!!! sounds delicious and enticing! what? this is
about flowers? exactly! nice job...

i dig it
scorpio
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Wonderful poem Karilea...much enjoyed...I loved the title...and the picture...

...believe what your heart feels...

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Karilea, this is absolutely delightful. I really enjoyed it....the poem and the picture.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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I loved the sense of humor in this.  Thanks for the smile!

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

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Well you've brought sunshine to my day
It's good to be back!~

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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Karilea, How clever you are.

Enjoyed this much.


Warm Regards,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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Dad would always have me weed that area for Mom.. member all the veggies?
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The naked ladies overtook Daddy's nasty-sturtiums....
 
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