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Did you miss me?
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Did you miss me? |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981
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I think I'm getting the hang of this! a few days can feel like an eternity, When kept away from someone that you love. Just a few miles can be like a vast sea Or the length of the sky that's so far up above, I missed you a lot, but did you miss me? You not being here is like losing one glove, When someone is left behind, some say that you should be free Then why did I feel like you gave me a shove, That there was something you are hideing from me... Sick of seeing people crying because their boyfriend is a dirty rotten cheater. Or girlfriend (a little less common) That happened to my sister, I pray that it will not happen to me! "Sticks and stones will break my bones, |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
 WHAT! i loaded my picture! Where is it! ugg! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh, how i wish people could be faithful |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Ohh, has to be approved. Whew! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Wind, you have such a fresh and direct way of expressing yourself. I feel your writes! Integrity is the virtue I deem most important in a relationship. If your partner loses his, at least you are still left with yours! Your sister is fortunate in the fact that she has such a loving and empathetic sister! ~ May the winds of good fortune always blow your way! Earth Angel |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Liz, I like this. You put a lot of truth on your poem. I think your sister is lucky to have you, too. By the way, I hope you can get your picture on...HeeHee!! "Love makes the world go around" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big huggssssssss) Oh Liz, my heart goes out to your sister, sadly so many get cheated on today and I send angel hugs out to them all and hope too it never happens to you as you and your sister are both deserving of sincere and faithful love! (sigh) Your sister is blessed to have you as a loving sister, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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