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Sandpiper
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0 posted 2002-11-10 11:32 AM


GRACE

I was dancing
on the dark side
of the moon
when I fell
into your church,
into your dark eyes

you reached into my sin,
and forgave
my transgressions

and I,
sang softly
with the choir
as your amazing grace
entered the naked
of me

~~how did you know?
how did you know?~~


© Copyright 2002 K. Addison Elliott - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-11-10 12:24 PM


been there dancing many times
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2 posted 2002-11-10 12:29 PM


nice and soft, good use of words

"Sticks and stones will break my bones,
But words will break my heart"

Sunshine
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3 posted 2002-11-10 01:01 PM



I'm not sure,
but sometimes we
shouldn't ask...

acceptance can be so much...

enjoyed this, Sandpiper...

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4 posted 2002-11-10 08:08 PM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, grace can be such an amazing thing and coincidentally in a split-second it can make an epiphany in the focus of an eye, I love it! (sigh) You always write with such grace, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandpiper, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2002-11-11 09:41 PM


Sounds like someone to consider keeping close. Enjoyed.
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6 posted 2002-11-11 09:45 PM


Wonderful feelings here.
Much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~Let your heart guide you...
  It whispers so listen closely~

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