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Open Poetry #23

Deeds (15 or less)

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-11-10 11:15 AM

Deeds

he moves
to a place
past words
and does
not squander
my ability
to need

I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you.

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

1 posted 2002-11-10 11:24 AM

...for need
is a place
not to be
squandered
by words...

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

2 posted 2002-11-10 07:06 PM

I couldn't even write a reply to such a beuatiful poem in so few words, truly lovely poetry .
L.of.L. Tom .
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'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-11-10 07:08 PM

Speechless

Cold hands means a warm heart

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

4 posted 2002-11-10 07:21 PM

Oh, you got me with this one.
So real. So, right. So very good!

Thanks,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-11-10 07:24 PM

Excellent Helen!
Wow! 15 or less now!
~Hugs~

~Let your heart guide you...
It whispers so listen closely~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-11-10 07:26 PM

(sigh) Oh Helen, this is wonderful, sweet friend, may your needs be fulfilled and your deeds entitled to you, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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