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sjh
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0 posted 2002-11-10 09:26 AM


WHITE HANDS, GREEN KNEES

I've often dreamt I'm back there,
among friends whose faces change.
Do you remember?
White hands and green knees,
chasing kisses. I miss it, so
I collect those faces.
I like them just the way they were.


© Copyright 2002 Stuart Handscombe - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-11-10 09:37 AM


Oh my Stuart!
I love this piece!
Wonderful thoughts in so few words.
Excellent!
~Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

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2 posted 2002-11-10 09:45 AM


sjh
Very nice, enjoyed the read.

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3 posted 2002-11-10 10:21 AM


Stuart~
Nothing here to be 'brutal' over ...
I simply adore the premise that it portrays~

Welcome to Passions' circle of poets and friends~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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Robert Adamson
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4 posted 2002-11-10 01:01 PM


Yeah, bring back those times. I like the way this poem helps me remember such times. Thank you.

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5 posted 2002-11-10 01:09 PM


I did love this! Great peice!

"Sticks and stones will break my bones,
But words will break my heart"

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6 posted 2002-11-10 01:42 PM


Stuart, I like this, too. Thanks for sharing with us.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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7 posted 2002-11-10 03:13 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, and may the spirit of that boy always shine in you and may you nchase those kisses with youth! (big hugggsssss) This is precious, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Stuart, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

sjh
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8 posted 2002-11-13 07:39 AM


Wow, thanks for all the kind words and giving me such a warm welcome to this group.

Cheers,
Stuart

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9 posted 2002-11-27 07:45 PM


I liked this so much I put it in my library. This really was amaizing. I had to bump it back to the top.

Never be normal!

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10 posted 2002-11-27 09:57 PM



Compact, powerful.
quietly so.

Thank you!

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