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A Colors Cyme
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A Colors Cyme |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A Colors Cyme I heard a whisper soft and free Whispering a song to me. Deep from in the shadows gray Sweeter than the sweetest gay It folded from some daffodils From golden petals drooping spills Throwing odors to the breeze In wistful touches of a tease I drank it with a thankful pause And gave a smile to show applause It was the sweetest kindest show That rode upon the wind in flow. It held me on a path of dream It weld me to the gardens gleam It softly took my hand in stay And offered me a moments play. A moment of a colors cyme A moment of a phantoms time |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Seymour, I loved this poem..and I learned a new word which your poem illustrated nicely It folded from some daffodils From golden petals drooping spills Throwing odors to the breeze In wistful touches of a tease so pretty...  M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, Almost as pretty as you.  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sy, you made Spring touch Fall... and a thankful poet reads you... yet again. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Sy! Your morning pieces make me feel warm and good. Enjoyed this with my cuppa. ~Morning hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Enchantress Thank you sweet, hugs back and have a good sunday. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
This is simply...... just plain ~pretty~ Mmmmmm, nice! Thanking you, as ever for sharing your talent, we are so blessed, Warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ My friend ... this is just AWESOME~ The serenity of the soft petals of your thoughts wraps me in a morning glow~ I like this one ... very, very much~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pat, Thank you so much for the warm nice. Marge, You are a sweetheart. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
It folded from some daffodils From golden petals drooping spills ======================================= and those will be my waaay cool lines for the day.... "drooping spills" I do so love the way your mind works.!! SO Stinkylove? what was in those petals? Raspberry tea???  *L*Love the imagery and intend in this gem of pen Sy-babes. *whispering winkies your way* No one has ever shown me how to see the world the way I see it now ... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling heart, you don’t know how awed I am of you when you write like this. That you can write well I acknowledge, when you write and the image is as clear and fresh as this is I applaud you, when you do so and my spirit lifts to dance I stand and shout well done. Without doubt you are inarguably a fantastic writer, I can almost smell the flowers and feel the touch of a spring. This is truly one of your utter utter best. I love this utterly utterly YOU are an amazing writing and this is incredibly beautiful. Softly wrap me in your sigh Take me to the place of why Don’t leave me in the dark too long Sing me breeze’s golden song Whisper again the words I need With this music my soul feed As long as I can come in here I know that beauty will appear Written in words of elegant grace That lay on my soul like fine lace Let me walk in your dreams my friend Until my days are at an end When I read you I know why I love the words written by Sy  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sy, I'm late today and no tea, but I sure loved this just the same. '...It held me on a path of dream It weld me to the gardens gleam It softly took my hand in stay And offered me a moments play...' Fantastic words ... hugs, Marti "I am not afraid of STORMS for I have learned how to sail my SHIP." |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Seymour, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I could see the golden rosepetals flowing on the breeze and spreading with a Midas touch the beauty to all! (big huggsssssss) I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good afternoon, Mr. T.! Dear Mr. T., you have made my day With these colorful "moments play" ~ May your life continue to be full of colors--and may you always be able to see them! tehe EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, I was only watching the bees collecting nectar in the breeze. I just love honey. And I my Tinkerbell as well.WWRS Mushy You are spoiling me. But I love it. Marti, You are a dear, thank you so much. Noah, Thank you my friend. Earth Angel Just love your comments. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Mr. Seymour, I'm late today, too. Been having computer trouble...still am....Ugh!! But, as always, I look for your poetry when I get a chance. It is always like a fresh cup of French Vanilla Cappuccino or a nice big Vanilla Coke....both of which I simply L-O-V-E. Your poetry is always refreshing to me, no matter what the subject...beautiful. Thanks for sharing your heart and your thoughts. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sy, it's good to be back...I love this, it's magical and free-flowing and as always you use great imagery and intent. My hats off to you dear poet Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
What a pretty poem, it evokes a quiet contentment. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
So very lovely, Sy! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
garysgirl Thank you for reading and commenting. Melissa, Thank you so much and I'm so glad you are back. Pilgrimage Thank you for the nice comment. Denise Thank you for the lovely. |
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