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my babe |
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dougsbird21 Member
since 2002-11-08
Posts 52London(from TX though) |
my babe a breakthrough 1+1=you (!) my little something special formed from love and stardust it’s amazing baby how you are a smidgen of us both yet a being all your own unique poetry words cannot describe how I adore you and your becoming a wonderful wonder a breakthrough like no other our soul masterpiece and like art you take in our hearts through our eyes envelope us we are your admirers forever "Write what you feel, not what u think you should feel." |
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mrmuse New Member
since 2002-11-10
Posts 6 |
like the movement this poem has. well done; a new take on what is one of the most popular subjects in the world:kids. however with this poem it's got a nice, distraction if you will, to it..doesn't make you think of them as the little [edited by moderator] factories they really are! i enjoyed the read..... [This message has been edited by Sunshine (11-10-2002 11:51 AM).] |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-05-19
Posts 8669Michigan, US |
I'm glad you enjoyed your own poem, Lisa. For the record, so did I. I did not, however, appreciate the duplicity.  Please email me at your leisure. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) This is soooooooo beautifully heartfelt, sweet friend, children are Gods most beautiful creation and true loves and you speak of this joy so very well! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lisa, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (11-10-2002 08:18 PM).] |
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