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leafseranade
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0 posted 2002-11-09 08:55 PM


..and he opened his world up to a little boy
who couldn't understand
...and the boy grew up to be a man
...and he opened his world up to a woman who wouldn't understand
...we don't at first
but then we learn
and then we choose
to understand

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1 posted 2002-11-09 08:58 PM




(smiles) This is so lovely, sweet friend, it is wonderful how we can make such cavalier transitions and open our hearts to the beautiful gems of life! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

MARK V SHELDON
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2 posted 2002-11-09 09:29 PM


I like the "circular" feel of this poem -- it's like a cycle of perpetuity...  until one chooses to change.  

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

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3 posted 2002-11-09 09:31 PM


Interesting poem, to choose or not to choose.
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4 posted 2002-11-10 02:51 AM


I like it, yes
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