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neill Junior Member
since 2002-11-06
Posts 13 |
surprise will you stand upright when you land? you thought the headlights were sunshine you think they'll tell you if they can but they don't remember all their lines you're counting on reason but your scared this time you'll disappear maybe one day we can keep those stars from falling through you what did they say? what do they breathe into your mouth on mondays? do you get high? it's no surprise and you spend you money in the sand they sold you heaven in high rise you think they'll help you if they can but you don't surrender all your time they counted on reason now they're scared its time you disappear [This message has been edited by neill (11-09-2002 05:32 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Neill, this is wonderfully said, sweet friend, your messages ring such truth and sincerity, this is well-said, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Not sure I understand this, but it sounds ominous, as if someone is being swallowed up by false friendships, and when the truth/reality hits, it will leave you wishing you were somewhere/someone else. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Sounds like a Hollywood tragedy that hits the paper headlines on a "daily" basis... Lots of interpretations in this one... -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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neill Junior Member
since 2002-11-06
Posts 13 |
corporate amercica... |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
Yep--know them well!! |
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