Solemn - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

dougsbird21
Member

since 2002-11-08

Posts 52
London(from TX though)

0 posted 2002-11-09 03:52 PM

Solemn

I see you
make me laugh
    reach out
  in pure darkness
see you
see me
  don’t you dare
    touch
      me
I am untouchable
in synch
                  within my own
solemn
in my
   i
    n
     s
      a
       n
        i
         t
          y

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-11-09 07:54 PM

(big huggssssss) Such intensity fills your words, sweet friend, I hope everything is alright, this is powerful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lisa, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

mrmuse
New Member

since 2002-11-10

Posts 6

2 posted 2002-11-10 11:43 AM

well the person above this reply of mine obviously likes the poem. But what is she so damn happy about? calm down woman! yep, its a good write. how can i say it? erm, it's solemn.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2002-11-10 01:23 PM

Noah is a he, and if you will take the time to read some of those who do respond( their works I mean) you will realize that he is always this friendly...and doesn't need calming down...

just another hint...be one person under your poem that you post, respond in that person..and there will be less confusion for others.
I know I am not a moderator, but I am just trying to be a "friend".

~smiling~ still
M

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (11-10-2002 01:25 PM).]

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2002-11-10 02:09 PM

A-M-E-N !!!!!!!!!!!!!! , Maureen!!!!!

(sorry I didn't know how to write this any bigger, or I would have !!!!)

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2002-11-10 02:13 PM

I'm so sorry, Lisa, but that reply from the other "person" got me VERY upset.
I really do like your poem. It has a lot of truth in it and is very well written. I like the way you put it on the paper.(I don't know the technical word for that)

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

6 posted 2002-11-10 02:41 PM

dougsbird21/mrmuse,

First let me welcome you to Passions. From what I've read of your work so far, I think you have talent.

I'm sure you will come to appreciate the various personalities here as you familiarize yourself with their writings and replies. A measure of respect and restraint are in order, without which, you will find, you won't be happy here.

Also, if you wish to use different user names, that's your perogative, many here do use different ones. But it will only lead to confusion if you switch back and forth between those different user names within the same post, as Maureen stated. Also, it will bump the poem to the top when you reply with a different user name than what you originally used for the post, and that is something that is not tolerated here, and we moderators do have our ways of checking into this if we have our suspicions that someone is doing that.

Please take the time, if you haven't already, to familiarize yourself with the guidelines of the forums. This will insure that the time you spend here is mutually enjoyable.

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.