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CSKpoet
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0 posted 2002-11-09 03:23 PM


Radiance
by
Magnus and CSKpoet


Oh whispering dove
do the wings soar into flight
upon winter’s breeze
where butterfly wings once flew
on tender love’s flowing breath

Fogging themirror’s reflect
in lover’s exhale
as nighttime carries the moon

Gossamer caress
in romantic rendezvous
rose brushed complexion
of two in passions embrace
shooting stars across the skies

Sparkling moonlit ambiance
casting glowing gaze
sighs within heavenly eyes

Shimmers in the night
of sky so dark, indigo
stars fill night time eyes
as wings take to soar on air
of cotton skies and moonbeams.

Coo of the dove mourning soft
brings to ear the cry
as eyes shine the morn anew.

Colorful sunrise
couple wrapped in warm embrace
by the light of day
etching another chapter
upon the heart of lovers

promises of tomorrow
where love never ends
a radiant shan-gri-la

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

© Copyright 2002 Cheryl Stewart Koomoa - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-11-09 03:30 PM




(smiles) Yay!!! Awwwwwwww, I just love how this poe cooed like a dove across these pages, sweet friends, I could truly feel Shang-ri-La reading this, this is precious, I love it, we all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Cheryl and Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

WhiteRose
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2 posted 2002-11-09 03:42 PM


This is beautiful. You both did a superb job. It's soft and tender and just lovely. Bravo!

garysgirl
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3 posted 2002-11-09 03:47 PM


Well, Cheryl and Barry, you know where I'm putting this beautiful love poem...right into my library. This is so pretty. thanks so much for sharing it with us.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2002-11-09 05:17 PM


Cheryl and Barry,
Well done, I enjoyed the read.

Charisma
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5 posted 2002-11-09 06:31 PM


:bravo: superb duet.....love it!

Charisma

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6 posted 2002-11-09 08:20 PM


Cher & Barry!
A beautiful romantic duet!
Very very nicely done.
~Hugs to you both!~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

CSKpoet
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7 posted 2002-11-09 10:36 PM


A sincere thank you for taking time to comment on this.
I am honored to write with Barry.
I consider his artful words as wonderfully expressive and genuinely emotive.
Big hugs to all,
Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Magnus
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8 posted 2002-11-11 06:27 PM


Cher...sorry that I just replied...Have been
out of town for a few days...

Thanx much for the poetry lesson...Enjoyed
the write...was fun..

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9 posted 2002-11-11 06:42 PM


That was great! together or apart, everything you write is wondefull!

"Sticks and stones will break my bones,
But words will break my heart"

majnu
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10 posted 2002-11-11 07:36 PM


very cool. i find any collaboration that works this well remamarkable becuase of how different even the most similar people are.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

scorpio
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11 posted 2002-11-11 07:47 PM


A fine blend of talents...well done..

...believe what your heart feels...

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2002-11-11 09:02 PM


I would like to visit this place where love never ends...James
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