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D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2002-11-09 01:15 PM


In loquacious talk
A mind wanders daydreaming
That your laconic statement
Caught me breathless

So abrupt was the terseness
That it left no need for interpretation
In pedantic focusing
You have cornered in on your prey

Taken aback by the deluge
I took a retrograde approach
To counter the onslaught
Of the frontal attack

But having done your homework
I was soon charmed
That you took on a ubiquitous presence
That magnetic charged me

In the ultimate chemical reaction
Of a super physical inter-reaction
That the physiological bonding
Create the animalistic friction
That needs no reasoning

For the tenacious adhesion
Keep me coming back
To conversations rated
Extremely hot

D.Lester Young 11/9/2002
Tuscaloosa, AL
Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry)


© Copyright 2002 David Lester Young - All Rights Reserved
brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
1 posted 2002-11-09 02:38 PM


D. Lester, firstly nice rhythm liked the way the words bounced out my tongue as I read this, even words that could trip up the tongue fiited snugged in this piece. A joy to read.

I used to make phantoms I could later chase images of all that could be desired then I got tired of counting all of these blessings"h.devoto magazine

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2002-11-09 02:39 PM


Awesome write

Cold hands means a warm heart

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