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Open Poetry #23

Distraction

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-11-09 01:06 PM

Distraction

he appeared
at a moment
of distraction
spending hours
with similar conversation
unfolding to
a feeling of comfort
and I would
have exchanged
all of
my loneliness
for the touch
of his warmth

I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you.

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

1 posted 2002-11-09 01:09 PM

The way you didn't say "the warmth of his touch" is great.

Ed

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-11-09 08:29 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I too would exchange my loneliness for that afterglow of joy always, this is a beautiful trade, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!