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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Let's talk about the differences-- let's plea for commonalities-- let's call it just a shade sort of and plea for neutral ground. Take me to the bitter place Make me unwish all that I've done... take me to Akasha--and with just that word make me profound. Eat the serpent's tail to make eternity become hoop snake-- Take a path of figure eight-- eternity is just oblate figure landing on her side-- [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (11-09-2002 07:46 AM).] |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Amen! Ed |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Eat the serpent's tail to make eternity become hoop snake-- Take a path of figure eight-- eternity is just oblate figure landing on her side-- VEry very clever....my slow brain is trying to remember the significance of the serpent symbol, has it something to do with how the world was formed, what myth? All I can come up is an episode of Millenium. Ok off to do my homework on that symbol. now to the poem, as always your style and images amaze me. Great write, K  I used to make phantoms I could later chase images of all that could be desired then I got tired of counting all of these blessings"h.devoto magazine |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
this sounds familiar.....  |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, Karen....your poems always amaze me, too. You have such wit and charm, Miss Serenity Blaze. Thanks for sharing your personality with all of us. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Karen, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I just love how your words are like a mongoose in flight, this is excellent, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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dougsbird21 Member
since 2002-11-08
Posts 52London(from TX though) |
Let's talk about the differences-- let's plea for commonalities-- let's call it just a shade sort of and plea for neutral ground OOH I really like those first lines!! Gripping!! |
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