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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown 
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With no friends or family Here all by myself Loneliness is here Filling up all of my days These days are so long I look at the walls As if they were a window Sitting here thinking With no car to go Even if I had one now I could not drive it Oh how I do wish I could get away from here For just one whole day 11-8-02 |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I loved all of your little serenus! You aren't alone, and you can get away just by reading other people's poetry. In fac, I'm going to write a poem for everyone who wishes they were somewhere else. Thanks for the inspiration! "Sticks and stones will break my bones, |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Sue, my heart goes out to you, sweet friend, I wish you this freedom too and know soon it will come as long as you believe! (sigh) I send more angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Close your eyes and explore paradise. What fascinating senyrus I loved the way they flowed one to another. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Contabo Member
since 2001-11-21
Posts 159 |
I would trade you places.....I would |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I look at the walls As if they were a window Sitting here thinking I love them all and as a unit..but this one spoke to me... And you, too, will get through this..I promise  hugsss Sue M |
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