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Sunnyone
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0 posted 2002-11-08 02:35 PM




I was wandering aimless, my soul's light seemed dead
and I just couldn't cope with what waited ahead
with a future that darkened from gray into black
In despair there was no turning back...

You were wandering aimless, with your lonely heart
inside you were wishing for a new love to start
you needed someone to stand by you, to share
But most of all, someone to care...

In the age of computers, Fate still casts her spell
and she does her improbable magic as well
She saw that together, we could make a fresh start
Even though we were oceans apart...

In the tunnel of space we were destined to meet
to finally know life with a real love, complete
you reached out to me as I reached out to you
Then your love and your strength pulled me through...

That tunnel is gone for all time evermore
but the love in our hearts has unlocked waiting doors
we have miles yet to travel, ashope guides the way
And the magic within us shall stay...



Pen how you truly feel...
it is a safety-valve for the soul!
    

[This message has been edited by Sunnyone (11-08-2002 03:31 PM).]

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Martie
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1 posted 2002-11-08 02:43 PM


Sunnyone

It is so wonderful that you you took the world of computers into the human and made forever happen.  I'm happy for you and loved this poem!

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2 posted 2002-11-08 03:10 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sunnyone, I cried reading this because I know this feeling ever so much, for I too have such a gorgeous on-line romance with my Joanna and we love each other so much and both dream of being married in the future and are still thousands of miles apart but we can hear each others whispers by the click of a mouse! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, I love it, I wish for this romance to always fill your heart with joy, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sunnyone, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!



Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sunnyone
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3 posted 2002-11-08 03:10 PM


Hi Martie...and this is really the story of Music Maker (John) and I. I'm so glad to know that you enjoyed it too....thank you, my friend!

Pen how you truly feel...
it is a safety-valve for the soul!
    


Sunnyone
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4 posted 2002-11-08 03:14 PM


oh, Noah....I just had a feeling that we were 'like spirits'! It is hard to have your dear one so far away, but I am here to tell you that your dreams can and will come true.
John and I are proof of that....it's a modern day fairy tale, with a happy 'beginning', as there will be no ending!!   Thank you Noah!!

Pen how you truly feel...
it is a safety-valve for the soul!
    


MARK V SHELDON
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5 posted 2002-11-08 04:21 PM


Sunnyone, I've been there, if but for a brief infinity...  May your lives follow the dreams in your hearts.  Enjoyed.

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

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6 posted 2002-11-08 04:37 PM


Oh, Sunnyone, this is such a beautiful love story. Gary and I didn't meet on the computer, but our love story kind of falls along the same lines. Thanks for sharing with us this lovely poem.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

Sunnyone
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7 posted 2002-11-08 05:03 PM


Hi Mark....thank you so much for your best wishes, it means a lot. And thank you also for reading here.  Sharing is the greatest form of friendship here, and I'm grateful for friends such as yourself.

Pen how you truly feel...
it is a safety-valve for the soul!
    


Sunnyone
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8 posted 2002-11-08 05:05 PM


Hi there garysgirl...and it doesn't matter where or how you met, a real love can survive any circumstance as John and I have learned.  I wish you and Gary the very best always, and am glad to have you visit today!

Pen how you truly feel...
it is a safety-valve for the soul!
    


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