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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Simplicity It's the plainness, I admire the restraint that you wear the feel of your words against mine, I bare. I am soothed by the feel when we are apart. It's simplistic, I know but it comes from this heart. From the moments of you where in truth I was bound tiny pieces of yesterday are no longer found. For the new of tomorrow shall bring on it's own, the simplicity between us the thrill of unknown. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Nice cadence... reminds me of a style I enjoy writing. -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Some would say Mark, that I march to a different beat *s thank you M |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Well some might say I beat to a different march But I like this also Gloom |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
haaaaaaa you crack me up...sometimes  M actually I think that saying is marching to a different drummer, but now I am not sure what the saying is... [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (11-08-2002 02:30 PM).] |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maureen, whatever "beat you're marching to", I like your style. It's very good. Thanks for sharing. "Love makes the world go around" |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you Ethel...some days a phrase comes to me and forces me to write..and I wonder later, if I should have held them back *s M |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, when it comes to love we can't help but say how we feel simplistically yet at the same time everything is a mystery and that is the magic of it all and the humour of it! (kiss on cheek) This is marvelous, sweet friend, I just love your thoughts, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Contabo Member
since 2001-11-21
Posts 159 |
Very nice Maureen...I like. Contabo |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi Maureen, I like this, it sounds like a confused moment, for all it's simplicity though. I know I never can tell which way I feel these days. This has a great flow and expression. Hope you are doing well. Sandra |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Noah... you are right, when it comes to love it is a simple yet mysterious feeling (and quite thrilling at times) Contabo, I like what you like Thank youSandra, it isn't really confusing as it is really jut a thought about the simplicity of loving. I am well and doing ok, better each day, how about you. It's so nice to see your words again, hugssss M |
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