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If I could see you
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If I could see you |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
If I could see you, if you were here before me, I would tell you how deeply I am touched by your eloquent words. If I could see you, if you could see me, you would know by my face I value your words as life. If I could see you, I would thank you, and pull your fingertips to my face, and gently brush them with my lips. Thank you. Kielo |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is beautiful, Kielo. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
touching..honestly..I'm feeling a bit nostalgic today and it reminds me of a few people and such...thanks for sharing Kristen If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Crysania Member
since 2002-09-21
Posts 67Lost in a dream. (Please don't wake!) |
*hugz* Very nice, Sis. I like it. *nods rapidly and feels very special* And just you wait, there's one coming right back at you.  |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Nice poem.. Thank you for posting. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Nice poem.. Thank you for posting. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Sorry for the double post.. This keeps on happening for some reason.. I probably should e-mail the moderater about it if it happens again. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
This is very well done. I love this poem for it captured exactly how I feel though I didn't know it until I just read this. Amazing! Thank you so much, Hugs to you, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Sweet and romantic.... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Very soft and loving, I liked it a lot. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
 Thank you very much, all. I'm glad you liked it. Maybe one day I'll meet some of you... *wistful smile*Kielo According to statistics, a man eats a prune every twenty seconds. I don't know who this fellw is, but I know where to find him. |
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