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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2002-11-08 01:23 PM



Right now, it is sight distorted,
with fear, hard and genuine.
What in mind effecting sight
creates this cascade of color
that bursts in lens, creating panic.

A swirl that moves with focus

distortion, distortion, distortion

the mind attempts to change the view.
Disappear this monster quirk
that paralyzes me with it's
indefinable rainbow upon sight,
and even upon closing of eyes
there, to taunt, the color swirl.

WhiteRose 11/08/02

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (11-08-2002 01:24 PM).]

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Kielo
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1 posted 2002-11-08 01:26 PM


Wow. This was great. It was beautiful to me, because it's true. Thank you.

Kielo

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2 posted 2002-11-08 09:59 PM




(smiles) Sometimes you just have to rinse the tears fro your eyes and that rainbow is back in its own proportion again! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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