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Zinsser
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0 posted 2002-11-08 11:49 AM




Moon dust sprinkles
From the sky
Mystically glowing
As it flies
Swirling around
Sure with plan
Lighting night with
Nature’s hand

Spider toiling
Ever faster
Web woven dress
To please the Master
Baby stars scattered
In perfect places
Magic of it all
In onlookers faces

Firefly’s light path
Through the woods
As Mother Nature strolls
Assured all is good
Master Universe smiling
At His treasure
And all who love her
Brings him pleasure

© Copyright 2002 Connie McDonald - All Rights Reserved
MARK V SHELDON
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1 posted 2002-11-08 11:52 AM


...a mid-autumn night's dream...  Good to read you again.

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

the_loner_23
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2 posted 2002-11-08 12:01 PM


I enjoyed this read.

Cold hands means a warm heart

garysgirl
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3 posted 2002-11-08 12:02 PM


Connie, I don't think I've seen you here since I've been here this last month. I hope you will post more of your work, because it looks like I've really been missing some good poetry. I enjoyed reading this poem very much. Thanks for sharing.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2002-11-08 12:49 PM


each stanza could stand alone..I enjoyed your view today. *s
M

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5 posted 2002-11-08 09:46 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo breathtaking, sweet friend, I love spiders and fireflies and all the wonderful nocturnal friends of the night are spoken so well here, yay! (kiss on cheek) This is illustrious, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Connie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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