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Walter Poe
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 787

0 posted 2002-11-08 07:40 AM

I skipped from left to right
Across the burning deck
to save my love unrequited
From the flameing wreck

I approach her perfect form
trapped beneath fallen beam
and i brace my back
though i burn in sulphorous steam

"Begone you foul usurper"
Her foul words do shock
"I wait for my prince charming
to free me from the block"

So i bade the foul wench
good luck into the flames
I did not stop to tell her
Prince charming caused the flames

Take a good look at my face
Well, don't my smile look out of place
look a little closer its easy to trace
The tracks of my tears

Opeth
Senior Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 1543
The Ravines

1 posted 2002-11-08 08:49 AM

Interesting tale, reminded me of a story I once heard from a western movie titled, My Name Is Nobody. Enjoyed.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-11-08 09:13 AM

Paul, I'm really glad that you've started posting here more regularly. I really do enjoy your work. It's very unique. Thanks for sharing with us.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Radrook
Senior Member

since 2002-08-09

Posts 648

3 posted 2002-11-08 03:32 PM

Reminds me of the time when I offered a handicapped person assistance and was almost hit over the head with a crutch!

LOL

Enjoyed!
God bless!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-11-08 10:21 PM

(big huggssssssss) Oh Walter, this is so very heartachingly powerful, sweet friend, deceit and betrayal are so very common and I hope it has never happened to you! (sigh) I send angel hugs out to all hurt by hypocritical love, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walter, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

dougsbird21
Member

since 2002-11-08

Posts 52
London(from TX though)

5 posted 2002-11-08 10:46 PM

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Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2002-11-09 01:09 AM

Well done! Enjoyed the twist of this.

kruser
Junior Member

since 2002-11-08

Posts 11

7 posted 2002-11-09 01:54 AM

nice writing, some really cool lines!

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

8 posted 2002-11-09 07:55 AM

Now this is my kind of tale!!!! Very fun and humorous to read....thanks!!!!

Pen how you truly feel...
it is a safety-valve for the soul!

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