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Somewhere a heart is breaking
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Somewhere a heart is breaking |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
A long time ago and far far away a fairy tale princess and a beautiful day A marriage was planned the talk of the land a millions songs and a thousand bands The big day arrived all banners held high the prince and princess to wed tonight But came the event the princess didnt show but a messenger proclaimed in words solemn and slow "Dear prince I do love you Dear prince I do care But dear prince i cant marry you for my heart no longer lies there" The morale of this tale for any prince unaware no matter how long or how far away Somewhere a heart is breaking Take a good look at my face |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Time and space two of the greatest foes for romance. Wonderfully written. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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blues hearted lady New Member
since 2002-11-07
Posts 9Melbourne, AUS |
it's comforting, isn't it sometimes, that we're never the only ones. Poems like this remind us that we're not. "You may say I'm a dreamer/ But I'm not the only one..." bhl |
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blues hearted lady New Member
since 2002-11-07
Posts 9Melbourne, AUS |
Oh, and, no relation to the great Edgar, are you?  |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Yea, it's true And ya don't forget it When it happens to you I remember when A lady kinda-sorta Stomped on my aorta Nice write Poe Luv Toe [This message has been edited by Toerag (11-08-2002 08:07 AM).] |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Walter, this is really good. It had a surprising ending, but I still liked it. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
We need to rewrite our heart tales with happy endings......  No one has ever shown me how to see the world the way I see it now ... |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
A sad love poem.. Enjoyed.. Thank you for sharing. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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