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Chaos Reign
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Chaos Reign |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Chaos Reign Each drop of dew that catches you Is part the mist of mornings coup Circling the world a flying shroud Mist in the form of sailing clouds. Each life a world of chaos reign On land or sea or life in vein Subject to chaotic law Reigning with an acid pour We scramble for our daily needs With quick replacement of our seeds But since chaotic is the law It’s bow to that or nothing more. Those that go beyond the veil Are swallowed by a Jonah Whale No matter how the voyage be We are the essence of the sea. We the kingdom, chaos the king Change and changing everything [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (11-08-2002 09:51 AM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
There is an element of chaos that is both compelling and fascinating. I think you have painted it here. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Yes, and I've been spit out more than once....I thank God I can swim.... symbolically, speaking of course.  I like this a lot, and upon re-reading find more and more insight... Thanks, Warm Regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kethry Thank you dear I enjoy painting pictures. Pat, Your comments are a pleasure to read, thank you. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Enjoyed this, Chaos has always been a friend of mine, Comment: Combine the 2nd and 3rd stanzas Bringing the rhyme together slightly more, But it is about chaos, so what the heck It wouldn’t even have to rhyme Gloom |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Professor Gloom Let chaos reign, thank you my friend. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
We the kingdom, chaos the king Change and changing everything ==============================  and you? you are my King of Kewl me Prince of Poetry me Ramadan of Rhyme me Emperor of Epopee and me Wizard of Winkies     No one has ever shown me how to see the world the way I see it now ... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, You know I just love twinkies, maybe we'll have some with tea. Randy said he'd take us for a spin if you like, he's looking for chaos. LOL WWS |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
As always, Mr. Seymour, sir, I loved your elegantly written words of poetry this morning. I hope you know that I look for you every morning on these pages of blue. I missed you when you were on your trip. Thanks for sharing with us. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
garysgirl It is my pleasure to have you as a reader. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oooh I'm late this morning... Is there still tea left? Loved the morning read Sy. Going back to have another look see. ~Morning hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Fascinating treatment of chaos. Your poem seems the opposite in its construction. Good job! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Enchantress Thank you sweet, have a good one, hugs. VAS, Good comment, enjoyed. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
What can I say, I always enjoy your words, and the pictures they paint.. I would love to think we are the essence of the sea... *s M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, Why think, we came out of the sea and eventually go back to it. Although in another form. LOL |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
My middle name is Chaos....I never have understood why?...They also used to say that when I was home..."Chaos Rains"....and with me, when it rains it pours..... You must stay up at night writing all this incredible stuff....kinda like I do....sometimes I spend countless hours, okay, countless minutes....okay, countless seconds working on my masterpieces....and it shows too doesn't it?.....LOL |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Very nice poem.. You are truly a gifted poet. Wish i could write as good as you. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Toe, You are the vertigo of chaos and the giddiness of promise. And those are the best kind of friends. LOL |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Connel You do, each is a world unto themselves. Thank you for the read. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssss) Indeed we all make up the ministry within this kingdom, and should we all unite and cherish one another as brothers and sisters, never again would we have to scramble for our needs or barter in that manner and chaos will have a whole new complexion! (sigh) This is marvelous, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, That would be ideal, thank you for the read and reply. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hello Sy -- Chaos is my middle name and it rules my world. Darn it! You have captured it with dignity. Hugs, Marti "I am not afraid of STORMS |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy The chaos here is drip in pool yours is filled winds of cool  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marti, A big thank you. Martie, I'm a fool for cool. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling heart this is wonderful and you are an incredible writer, yes, you are you know and it is in the realms of dreams where your touch stirs me most, one of your most dazzling arts is that you show the picture colour the canvas and shine the light. You know I love this, I love it utterly utterly utterly. Poetic minds in loving fold Linked together in poet’s mould Signs of truth arise in this The softest brush of poet’s kiss Gathered the strands of peace The thoughts of truth bring release Take the chaos and spread calm Fill our thoughts with your balm Stir the touch of mystery Held within the hope of me Lift the lid to peer inside Show these hopes that still abide The spirit flows on the wing Moves the voice to simply sing Hopeful delight waits to show How the mind and spirit flow Chaotic choices alter fate Send those who err through hells gate Love and warm stuff as always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha Your comments in poetic fashion are a delight to read. You are quite the poet. I thank you for picking me as one of the ones you like to read. Take care and I wish you and yours friendly days. |
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