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ThunderMage
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0 posted 2002-11-08 05:18 AM


His sword gleams in the morning sun,
A battle fought and bravely won.
A polished shield reflects his heart,
His body trained in a deadly art.
The blade an extension of his arm,
His armour a shell to defend against harm.
This fighter of legend now stands tall,
Victorious and towering over them all.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

© Copyright 2002 Liam Hall - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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1 posted 2002-11-08 08:05 AM


ThunderMage,
powerful story of a warrior.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



the_loner_23
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2 posted 2002-11-08 11:02 AM


I love your warrior tales. Awesome poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

ThunderMage
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3 posted 2002-11-08 01:36 PM


A warrior's blood flows through my veins, so I know what they think and feel, or at least I have a good guess.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

Radrook
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4 posted 2002-11-08 03:42 PM


Enjoyed!
God Bless!
THE ARMOR OF GOD: (EPHESIANS 6:10-20) FINALLY MY BRETHREN BE STRONG IN THE LORD AND IN THE POWER OF HIS MIGHT. PUT ON THE WHOLE ARMOR OF GOD THAT YE MAY BE ABLE TO STAND AGAINST THE WILES OF THE DEVIL.

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-11-08 10:23 PM




(smiles) Yay!!! May the heroes live on and legends never die! (sigh) You bring back these times of great chivalry and might, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liam, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

garysgirl
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6 posted 2002-11-09 12:15 PM


I liked your poem of warriors. It sounded kinda like a story.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

dougsbird21
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7 posted 2002-11-09 01:01 PM


nice one....good portrayal of those good old knights in shining armor. Now all we have are police who, without 5 other men with them, can't catch one puny thief! What happened to the days of bravery, chivalry and all that?!?!?
ThunderMage
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8 posted 2002-11-09 01:28 PM


Yea... back then one knight would face an entire gang by himself. Now we have police who take on one unarmed weakling ten-on-one and the weakling still wins.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

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