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Stolen Simplicity
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 22
Canadian

0 posted 2002-11-07 10:52 PM



(I wrote this awhile ago)

The hollow land,
The days gone by,
The memory sleeps,
The idea's die.

The familiar place,
The good 'ol times,
Do I remember you?
Or did you die?

As smiles fade,
Tears flow down,
Doors are closed,
Windows in disguise.

Figures weep,
While I hide,
Empty space sleeps,
I close my eyes.

Don't want to see,
Would hate to know,
Anyways I ask,
Why, I don't know.

What good it does,
Is unknown to me,
In the end,
Only empty is left for me.

© Copyright 2002 Elizabeth - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-11-07 10:58 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Elizabeth, I'm so happy this is from before, sweet friend, I hope now all these feelings are behind you for you are so much more and I know so muc beauty lies in store for you, just believe and you shall find! (sigh) This is honestly heartfelt, sweet friend, I send angel hugs of comfort your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2002-11-07 11:06 PM


This is such a sad poem. But wonderfully written.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Radrook
Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648

3 posted 2002-11-08 03:21 PM


Wow!


Very skillfuly handled!
The existential sense of despair came through loud and clear!

Enjoyed!

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