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Beside The Flickering Candlelight
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Beside The Flickering Candlelight |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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 Petals of roses and gardenias Have covered our love bed With so very little effort My mind is easily read We lie so close together Beside the flickering candlelight Within each others arms Is where we'll spend this night Our bodies glow in profile As my love for you now burns My heart grows ever fonder It's for you that it now yearns Lips meet in anticipation Warm breath against my skin In this, our game of love We're both guaranteed to win I am in motion |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Such a beautiful love poem.. Enjoyed and thank you for sharing. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sue, this is gorgeous! Very romantic  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I love this, your wonderful words always scatter rosepetals and flicker flames to us all, this is sooooo romantic, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sue, you are one of the few people I know who can continually write love poems and each one is more romantic and beautiful than the previous. I just love reading these and have saved each one. Hugs, Marti |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
It sings a song and is very clear. Thank you. etoodog |
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