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Spiros Zafiris
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0 posted 2002-11-07 10:04 PM


those of us who know about gratitude,
do not take anything for granted
we may think, "soon, I'll be in Heaven"
but we are forever careful
not to disappoint The Kind Forces

Love and Kindness; Virtue, Valor and Gratitude
-just to name a few

when we shoot upward
and upward, still
-knowing we have been accepted-
knowing, this time, it isn't a trial run;
we will not think of anything in particular
we will, simply, wait for our arrival

gratefully, we will zoom upwards

       ****    ****    ****

..circa 2002..Copyright 2002 Spiros Zafiris
..poem archived in several other sites

© Copyright 2002 Spiros Zafiris - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-11-07 10:09 PM




(smiles) Oh Spiros, this is delightful, sweet friend, we all share a long journey together and together may we all be gratified by the blessings laid upon us and hold charity in our own hearts! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Spiros, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Connel
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2 posted 2002-11-07 10:12 PM


Beautiful poem.. Thank you for sharing.

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

Robert Adamson
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3 posted 2002-11-07 11:02 PM


"gratefully, we will zoom upwards"
I thought about that, lol, and concluded that zoom is the key here. Thank you.


etoodog

[This message has been edited by Robert Adamson (11-07-2002 11:03 PM).]

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