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TradingSpaces19
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0 posted 2002-11-07 06:24 PM



You came into this world,
scared, hungry, cold, and aggarvated.

You didn't know what was going on,
You thought there would be one more month.

I wasn't there when you were born,
I only saw you on the 3rd of November.

You are so tiny,
You are so sweet.

I held you and you were so light,
I thought you'd take after your brother
and be heavy.

I wish you the best in everything you do,
You will be so pretty when you are older.

You have a truly beautiful name,
Grace KarolinaSunshine.

I love you Grace,
I wish for you the very best in life.

Copyright 2002 Andrea Michelle Kruckenberg
**Okay just to let you all know that this is for and about my new little cousin!**



© Copyright 2002 Andrea Kruckenberg - All Rights Reserved
S Arthur Grey
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1 posted 2002-11-07 06:30 PM


We should all be so welcomed
Spiros Zafiris
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2 posted 2002-11-07 06:42 PM


..TradingSpaces19../\..enjoyed reading; very sweet; good poem, too..

../\..Spiros

------------gratitude---------

TradingSpaces19
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3 posted 2002-11-07 07:07 PM


Thank you all! my cousin is very cute and sweet and so is her brother who is a year old.

Andrea

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-11-07 10:28 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is such a beautifully heartfelt dedication to your cousin, sweet friend, I just know your cousin will forever cherish this, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Andrea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (11-07-2002 10:28 PM).]

TradingSpaces19
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5 posted 2002-11-08 06:11 PM


Thank you all for your nice comments, espiecally you Noah! I love your poems too.

Andrea Kruckenberg

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6 posted 2002-11-08 07:40 PM


Andrea, this is such a sweet and compassionate poem. I wish you and your little cousin the best. Thanks for sharing this poem.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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