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Hey ... Hello
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Hey ... Hello |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT 
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Hey ... hello, Say, what do you know? What of World Peace, and weather in Greece ... Do you think your date will show? <<< phone rings on other end >>> Hey ... hello, How did your day go? Boss said "your late, your life has to wait ..." I hope you will take it slow. <<< phone rings a second time >>> Hey ... hello, I love you so ... I have to say I'm feeling this way ... I was thinking you should know. <<< phone is answered >>> "Hey ... Hello!" Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure. - C. Belville 02 |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
I really like this. Very unique style. I enjoyed a lot.  Dawn |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Hey, hello there Craig! Enjoyed the call. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Craig~ I really did enjoy this. Very creative concept, and wonderful done. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Thank you ladys ... KC, my phone voice is nothing like the real thing ... LOL !! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Craig, what do you mean by your "phone voice is not like the real thing"??? HeeHee!! Seriously, I like the way you wrote this. It was unique, with your own style showing through. Thanks for sharing with us. Love makes the world go 'round (unkown) |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Good style to write your poem. Enjoyed. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautifully novel, sweet friend, I love this, you speak with such various tones and metronomes here, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Thank you all for your time and comments ... it was fun writing this piece. Just an everyday conversation, never really knowing just what to say ... GG - the mind plays tricks on us from sounds and words that create our own image of what we see. I have been told my voice does such, so my words may have the same effect. |
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