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My Dear Oh Pongo ( About a Dog )
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My Dear Oh Pongo ( About a Dog ) |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
My dear oh pongo, Why did you have to go? I remember when I first seen you. All I said was, 'Hello' I wish you were here. Here with me. Oh how I miss, Playing by that tree. Me and you, Would run around And play ball. But now, I'm just down. I will never see you again. Oh but how I loved you. And ill never see you. Now, I have the blues. You went because, My other dog Went out, If the fog. He couldn't see And he bit some foe But now I know. He didn't know. My pongo had to go Even if he didn't want to. Ill never forget you pongo, And I will always love you. Its now time, To stop these words. Before I go too far. And tell you bout my bird. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Chris I do know what it's like to miss a pet so loved. Well written. |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
Nice touch, it brought back some dog memories... all good. Thank you. etoodog |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
A sweet poem. It reminded me of that disney classic 101 dalmations. "oh Pongo, what would she want to do with our puppies...." But seriusly, I enjoyed your poem, ad encourage you to keep up the good work! "Sticks and stones will break my bones, |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Chris, I'm so sorry about your dog. If you read my poem about my Scooter you'll know how I feel about my little doggy...."My Little Dog---My Baby". I never thought I would be this attached to an animal, but I sure am. Love makes the world go 'round (unkown) |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Wind, That is why i named pongo pongo, is because of 101 dalmations.. The in the movie was a dalmation and named pongo, and my dog was a dalmation so i would call him pongo.. lol.. He knew his name. All you had to do is has PON and hes allready to ya.. He was a cool dog... Thank you guys for the nice replies. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Chris, this is so sadly beautiful, I send angel hugs of comfort out to you and your loss but know Pongo will always be blessed to have you as a true loving owner and will forever be there in your heart! (sigh) This too reminded me of Pongo in 101 Dalmations, my favorite one was always Rolly, he wa sso cute, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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