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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-11-08 05:10 PM

Silhouette and More

Windows bared, but for the twilight
Clustered shadows, watching, hid.
Movement dusting, slight to incite
The view of softness, tempting bid.

Silhouette, her edges showing
Finely detailed, outlined curves.
Eyes in follow, slowing knowing
What she holds there, in reserve.

Waiting for inviting moment
Time will show its face, one day.
Out of hiding, sent from torment
Velvet blessings, she'll convey.

Silhouette transmits desire
Eyes watch eyes, ignite the fire.

~~*~~

To understand the inner workings
He for she becomes the norm.
Pain results in more of pleasure
To her wishes, must conform.

Into the shadows, hand is reaching
Interwoven fingers' need.
Wordless moments strike the blinded
Intensity, the body's feed.

A lifetime, need not be forever
Time's allotment has its place.
Valued more for trust in loving
Tucked away, your dark embrace.

Silent thoughts of his in borrow
Rise to meet the next of morrow.

~~*~~

Share the path that's laid before me
Unto you my promise holds.
Experience what dreams are made of
Mixed emotions scribed in gold.

Fail not ever, come the moonbeams
Children, We, of starry nights
Float away on stolen moments
Touch to fade, come morning light.

What is love, but heartful sharing
Intense desire, attracted to.
Rise to meet me next to morrow
Camouflaged in thoughts of you.

Then eyes to eyes, I shall convey
The me of more, your hold, to stay.

~~*~~
M

*my own little milestone

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

1 posted 2002-11-08 05:36 PM

That's a wholesome mind-full of reading, thought, and impressions... I sense many folds in this one, though the first round is especially curvacious...

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2002-11-08 05:46 PM

Well Mark,
the first poem was written awhile ago the next two tonight...all in all they are saying...tomorow is yet to come but when it does...it will be well worth it...for someone.

Thank you

anyway I was trying to make a "mark" on my slightly over 6000th posting, doing it quietly as it usually goes unnoticed.
M

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (11-08-2002 05:47 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-11-08 10:28 PM

"Fail not ever, come the moonbeams
Children, We, of starry nights
Float away on stolen moments
Touch to fade, come morning light."

BRAVO!!! Oh Maureen, this is excellent, the form, the thoughts, everything! (kiss on cheek) CONGRATULATIONS ON 6000, sweet friend, we are all soooooooo proud of you, yay! This is a true milestone and labor of love, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2002-11-08 11:47 PM

C-O-N-G-R-A-T-U-L-A-T-I-O-N-S
on 6000 posts!!!
This is really a milestone with such beautiful poetry.
Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts and feelings with us,
Maureen.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

5 posted 2002-11-09 01:31 AM

"Then eyes to eyes, I shall convey
The me of more, your hold, to stay."

That's is what keeps me reading all way to the end..
Enjoyed
Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

[This message has been edited by bslicker (11-09-2002 01:33 AM).]

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

6 posted 2002-11-09 10:39 AM

Great Write!!!
so very much enjoyed

~~ Connie~~

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2002-11-10 04:59 PM

Noah, I am sort of satisfied with this positive poem and I am happy that you could share my thoughts *s
hugs
M and thanks on the milestone...

Thank you Ethel for sharing my words with me.

Bernie, glad you could enjoy my thoughts.

Connie, Hi there, thank you. Hope you are well.

M

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