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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-11-07 04:40 AM


Beauty Return To Me

For awhile it was beautiful
but now I don't know if the
beauty really existed or if
it was just a fantasy show.
Was this beauty destined
to last only for a season?
Is this the nature of beauty
to leave for all of
the wrong reasons?
I hope I'm only sowing
seeds of discontent.
I hope beauty will find
its way back to me from
wherever it is it went.

JamesLee
November07
2002

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (11-07-2002 04:45 AM).]

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AniKay83
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1 posted 2002-11-07 05:11 AM


This poem is very beautiful, not everything is fleeting....

much love
~Krissie

"No one has ever loved ~anyone~ the way ~everyone~ wants to be loved"
~Mignon McLaughlin~

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2002-11-07 05:57 AM


Sometimes James all we need to do is seek the beauty and we find it again.  Very deep write, I hope your beauty returns to you again.
Radrook
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3 posted 2002-11-07 11:55 AM


Life and its beauties are so fleeting.
Very well expressed.
Enjoyed the read.

God bless!

DawnG
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4 posted 2002-11-07 11:57 AM


James,

I know these feelings well. I hope soon you can find the beauty again.

                               Dawn

garysgirl
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5 posted 2002-11-07 12:06 PM


James, the beauty in your poem is here to stay. I hope you find the kind of beauty you're writing about again, though. Good luck.

Love makes the world go 'round (unkown)
with love and hugs from Ethel
                  

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6 posted 2002-11-07 01:16 PM




(sigh) Oh James, I know with all my heart you will find it, sweet friend, you are so deserving of it and the boughs will blossom again for certain! (big huggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Suetang
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7 posted 2002-11-07 10:27 PM


Hello James

Your words made me feel so sad and I can only hope that a beautiful bouquet of love will come and fill your heart.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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