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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-11-07 04:23 AM


A Mutual Seduction

I can remember the first
time I layed eyes on her
although it was a long
long time ago.
I remember thinking
where has she been
all my life.
She was definately
a woman I wanted
to get to know.
We had the standard
formal introductions
and then she indicated
she was interested
in a seduction...
I cooperated in
every possible way.
I knew a mutual seduction
was birthed on that day.

JamesLee
November06
2002



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AniKay83
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since 2000-06-28
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1 posted 2002-11-07 04:29 AM


and then she indicated
she was interested
in a seduction...
I cooperated in
every possible way.
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SCORE!!!!! lmao just kidding!!! Very impressive!

Much love,
~Krissie


"No one has ever loved ~anyone~ the way ~everyone~ wants to be loved"
~Mignon McLaughlin~

[This message has been edited by AniKay83 (11-07-2002 04:29 AM).]

vlraynes
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2 posted 2002-11-07 04:32 AM



Nicely penned, James.
Enjoyed this, my friend.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
3 posted 2002-11-07 03:55 PM


Hello James

You certainly seduced this reader with your words.

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Connel
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4 posted 2002-11-07 10:03 PM


James,

Great poem.. Thank you for sharing.

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-11-07 10:11 PM




(sigh) This is sooooooo wonderfully said, sweet friend, I love it, your wonderful words always seduce with the language of gods, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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