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0 posted 2002-11-07 12:38 PM




In deepest slumber
A midnight kiss
No dream has ever felt like this
Much too real….

It’s fantasy passion
Just make believe
Amazing what one can conceive
….new morning blush

waking her day
with wistful hush


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1 posted 2002-11-07 12:53 PM


Sea, I think you met the challenge very well. Thanks for sharing.

Love makes the world go 'round (unkown)
with love and hugs from Ethel
                  

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2 posted 2002-11-07 12:55 PM


thanks Ethel, I like a good challenge and this one was fun
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3 posted 2002-11-07 02:40 AM


A challenge well met... A great write SEA.

Enjoyed

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4 posted 2002-11-07 09:54 AM


I didnt see any repeaded or not allowed words in your poem, Challenge well met.

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

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5 posted 2002-11-07 11:01 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, yay, you did it, i think I'm going to give this challenge a try too! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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6 posted 2002-11-07 12:58 PM


This is pretty.  I especially enjoyed the morning blush. *hugs*

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

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