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Ryan Member
since 1999-06-10
Posts 297Kansas |
people in the stadium like coyotes baying at the moon |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
but is it for the game or the crowd....  |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Ryan, I enjoyed this. Dawn |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
The herding instinct! LOL! God bless! |
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blues hearted lady New Member
since 2002-11-07
Posts 9Melbourne, AUS |
I can relate to this, as a lover of concerts. You may have been alluding to other things, but that's what I immediately thought of - a stadium packed with people who don't cease their howling, "baying", just pouring away their dignity and individualism in the crowd but not caring... it's a good emotion. Short but really personal, it can evoke a lot in different people I think. Thanks. I like it. bhl |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Great! Warm Regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Ryan, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love concerts so much, I have seen Counting Crows, am going to see Dave Matthews and dream so much of seeing Shakira live! (sigh) This is lively, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ryan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ryan, I thought of two rival high school or college teams(like the Florida Seminoles....my team and the Florida Gators....Gary's team) playing and cheering their individual teams on....sounding like a bunch of howling coyotes. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Yo Polar Bear GO TEAM  |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Ryan, I didnt understand this poem AT ALL!.. You really have to work on it.. Sorry, but thats the truth. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Masked Intruder
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since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
This was a month ago. But, then again, I guess you did say Homecoming. Good thing I was paying attention. |
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