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Maverick Wolf
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0 posted 2002-11-06 10:28 PM




Won’t you take a walk with me?
I hope I’m not asking too much
It may be cold and rainy
But I’ll keep you warm
If you’ll only take a walk with me

© Copyright 2002 Jason Botterill - All Rights Reserved
Connel
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1 posted 2002-11-06 10:37 PM


Wolf, Nice words,..

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

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2 posted 2002-11-07 12:04 PM


Jason,

A very nice poem. I'd be happy to take a walk with you if you do promise to keep me warm from the chilly air.

                               Dawn

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3 posted 2002-11-07 12:08 PM


a walk in the rain is something I could never resist!
Suetang
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4 posted 2002-11-07 12:22 PM


Hello Jason

How could I resist?  It would be a pleasure to walk with you.

Take care.....Sue


I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

[This message has been edited by Suetang (11-07-2002 12:22 AM).]

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5 posted 2002-11-07 06:14 AM


I love walks in the rain.  Well written.
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