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Ebb and Flow |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... 
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Ebb and Flow You say you know me But still you wonder why And ask if my words Were no more than silvered lies Well ask your questions But don’t ask of me For who I am I no longer see Maybe a wanderer Amid the faceless sea Searching the darkness For a chance to be free It’s all just an illusion Perhaps more than less And we’re all lost within This fleeting caress What’s here and now Is just ebb and flow As for what is real I ask, who’s to know? Maybe all one can do is hope to end up with the right regrets. ~Arthur Miller |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Eddie it has been to long since we have seen your words. oh this is a wonderful write.....very much enjoyed and hope all is well with you. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Gentle Spirit ~ Sadly my visits are less often than I’d like, and even then I tend to read much more than I can write! As for “well” I guess that’s all a matter of perspective!  . Always appreciate your thoughts and always good to know you enjoy my ramblings, take care!Maybe all one can do is hope to end up with the right regrets. ~Arthur Miller |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
It’s all just an illusion Perhaps more than less And we’re all lost within This fleeting caress. I agree with Donna, it's been too long, and this is a splendid write. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Eddie, this is so very true, sweet friend, I think none of us know but that is what makes dreams and expectations so magical as there is a reat deal of sand dollars still to come our way! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is fabulous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eddie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Eddie...so nice to see you here. Wonderful write...and I too hope all is well. ~Hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Eddie, I enjoyed this, though I could feel a bit of sadness. Hope all is well.Thanks much for sharing with us. Love makes the world go 'round (unkown) |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
I really enoyed this poem.. It reminded me of something.. I cant remember... But its a good poem. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
What can I say Eddie? This has more meaning to me than you realise. Take care my dear friend. D Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Eddie~ This is so beautifully penned, and it tugged at my heart. Nice to see you, my friend. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Many times I wonder what is real...I guess if it happened its real...even if we don't like the outcome...James |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
"ebb and flow" ... a very cool phrase and theme... something I expect from a POET like your self  So good to read your rhymes and see your smiling face poet Eddie sir No one has ever shown me how to see the world the way I see it now ... |
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Alicia Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 279 |
~Hey Eddie, good to see you here again,...your last stanza keeps playing over and over in my mind - Other pieces just pinch me in this,...take care of yourself. *Peace. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
WhiteRose ~ Thank you, I’ll try and make more regular appearances. Noah ~ As always, I thank you for reading. Enchantress ~ It’s nice to be here, thank you! Garysgirl ~ Yes, there is sadness there, still it’s good to know you enjoyed. Connel ~ Hopfully they were good memories. Dee ~ Sometimes I think words can just get in the way, take care! Vicky ~ Thank you, glad you found something in there. James ~ Sometimes I think I wonder entirely too much! Janet ~ It can be hard to met those expectations sometimes! So good to have your comment, and your smiles , thank you, and take care!Alicia ~ And here I thought I was the only one with such thoughts! Thank you my friend, your thoughts are much appreciated, take care!Maybe all one can do is hope to end up with the right regrets. ~Arthur Miller |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
hmm...this may be one of my favorite eagle poems....... much enjoyed these words my friend...hugs, g "dont cry because its over, smile because it happened...!" -unknown |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
Beautiful feelings through poetry. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
g ~ A favourite! Wow! Glad you enjoyed my friend, take care! Sigheyes ~ Thank you for stopping by to add your thoughts. Maybe all one can do is hope to end up with the right regrets. ~Arthur Miller |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very true, very deep thinking |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I guess I was just having another of my "moments", thank you. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Just taking a stroll and finding things missing in my library. D Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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