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Etcetera
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since 2002-11-06
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0 posted 2002-11-06 01:10 PM


**I'm new to Passions. I hope you will like my poems, as I've enjoyed reading many of yours.**


A Flower's Cry...

The storm is over, the streets are wet
The clouds have cleared, the rainbow has set
The sky is filled as all the birds fly
Yet alone and lost, lies A Flower's Cry

To see a daughter, a promise has been made
Daddies little girl waits, under the summer trees shade
But something isn't right as time passes by
Crushed, limp and bleeding, A Flower's Cry

Two vows, two hearts, ‘till death do us part
Love disappeared, a marriage doomed from the start
No need to ask, I see it in your eyes
Somewhere inside dwells, A Flower's Cry

Here today, gone tomorrow
A life of love, A life of sorrow
Taken away, no need to ask why
It shouts it screams, A Flower's Cry…

~Kymela~


© Copyright 2002 Kymela - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2002-11-06 01:12 PM


I am enjoying your posts and await more.  Very well done.
secretlife
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2 posted 2002-11-06 01:16 PM


Welcome to passions.... Your poems is so lovely..
Very nice thoughts and words...Waiting to read more..


Hugess


Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)


Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2002-11-06 01:44 PM



Hi! Welcome to Passions!

This poem is sweet and yet it is also so sad.

You spoke softly--with such gentleness.

~ Enjoy your new family of kindred spirits!

Earth Angel

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
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4 posted 2002-11-06 01:49 PM


Soft and beautiful, and so very sad. An excellent write.

Welcome to Passions

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-11-06 03:22 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Kymela, this is soooooo beautiful yet so sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to all the children whose promises are broken and I wish for the rainbow to come and fill all their hearts with compassion and content! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we are all so happy you're here as you are a very special friend to us all, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kymela, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
6 posted 2002-11-06 03:26 PM



Yes, I'm going to enjoy reading you...
thank you for this...
looking forward to more...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2002-11-06 03:35 PM


You write with such a gentle touch...
I am enjoying reading you..
~Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

paladin
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8 posted 2002-11-06 08:33 PM


Wellcome to passions.We have to be reminded how much divorce hurts the children.They think if mommy and daddy stop loving each other will they stop loving me.

paladin

NSnaomian
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since 2002-07-22
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9 posted 2002-11-06 08:41 PM


Welcome to Passions! I really hope to see more of you...
This was outstanding and I enjoyed it thoroughly!

Laura

"I have seen what a laugh can do. It can transform almost unbearable tears into something bearable, even hopeful."
-Bob Hope-

garysgirl
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10 posted 2002-11-07 12:01 PM


Welcome to Passions. I really enjoyed your poem and look forwards to much more. thanks for sharing with us.

Love makes the world go 'round (unkown)
with love and hugs from Ethel
                  

DawnG
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11 posted 2002-11-07 12:16 PM


Kymela,

I enjoyed this sad poem very much. I can't wait to read more. Thanks for sharing and another big welcome to Passions from me

                            Dawn

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
12 posted 2002-11-07 12:25 PM


Hello Kymela

Welcome to Passions and I hope you enjoy your time in this warm and loving environment.  Your words were nothing short of beautiful and were written with flair.  I'll look forward to reading more.

Take care....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Robert Adamson
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since 2002-10-21
Posts 328
PA/USA
13 posted 2002-11-07 01:14 AM


You have a magnetic charm with these words, so true.I feel them deeply. Thank you.

etoodog

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT
14 posted 2002-11-07 01:28 AM


A touch of wisdom,
  a touch of sorrows,
a touch of healing
  for such tomorrows.

Your words give HOPE the strength needed,
   well done.
  

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