»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #23
»
Serenity
| Open Poetry #23 |
|
Serenity |
|
|
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
|
Serenity I tread lightly in my mind dropping hints rating the moments shared never a closure to the consequences of loving you. I wade into the shadows of sleep taking with me the senses of your being indulging myself in trust knowing little promising less reluctantly tucking away this study in blue. I gather courage each morning attempting the checks and balances of a life stilled, seasoned in want sometimes weaving dreams into my days and in this way feeling the power of warmth to continue on. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
||
| © Copyright 2002 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved | |||
Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yes, and keep paying your dues and making your checks and balances with faith as courage is just the grand step to this serenity you seek and will enlighten you through every dawn! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
||
bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
And continue and continue and continue on and on and on. Enjoyed the write Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
||
|
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
now you KNOW my rule...I reply to all poetry with Serenity in the title. that first stanza hit home-- serenity is INDEED elusive... hugs you. Now I'm off to find that free verse... |
||
|
Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
A beutifull poem that show courage and determination! I enjoyed reading it. "Sticks and stones will break my bones, |
||
|
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Such truth in your words...the ways that we content ourselves through loss and times of missing. Take good care. ThisDiamond |
||
|
Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
I really like your poem.. Good job! I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
||
|
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Noah, faith..that's it..one must have faith( my sister's middle name *s) bslicker, thank you for stopping by. M serenity, I expected the title may have captured your eye...I am always working towards that goal of serenity. thanks  hugs M Wind...thank you  ThisDiamond, yes it is hard at times, but I am trying to be content...and not want for more than I need or deserve. Connel..thank you *s M |
||
|
Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Little Mo darling girl this is utterly utterly wonderful When I think you have reached the peak of perfection you then write something that is so perfect, so well written and full of beauty Thank you for this true delight, it is so entrancing to the soul of the reader And succedding in your endevour darling heart, you are learning indeed.   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
||
|
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Maureen,you expressed it perfectly. Very nice write. Hugs Sandra |
||
|
Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
"never a closure..."...beautiful, yet sad. Without closure how does one move on...yet how does one find closure? Maybe that's not where you were going with this but that's where you got me going....thanks for the trip |
||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
glad I went back for this... |
||
|
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
dont stop dream weaving into your day, i enjoyed the sense of serentity, yes, in this poem |
||
|
A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
the check and balances......as smooth as your words flow, well done~! |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
