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Spiros Zafiris
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0 posted 2002-11-06 06:47 AM


no, she didn't elevate off the ground,
she didn't recite odes supreme,
nor did she demonstrate her wisdom
with axioms of fond brooks

after her smile she whispered,
"trees, alone, may yearn
and find their wishes broadcast
throughout the gardens above

every other forestlife
must wait and hope
the trees have done their wishing"

     ****    ****    ****

..circa 2002..Copyright 2002 Spiros Zafiris
..poem archived in several other sites
..channeled; from spirit, Ram; through Spiros



© Copyright 2002 Spiros Zafiris - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-11-06 07:06 AM



She may stand, rooted,
grounded, but still ~
she moves
in the wind...

garysgirl
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2 posted 2002-11-06 07:13 AM


Spiros, I saw the forest in this one.
Thanks for sharing.

Love makes the world go 'round (unkown)
with love and hugs from Ethel
                  

regards2you
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3 posted 2002-11-06 09:29 AM




But, you did demonstrate your
~wisdom~ in the writing  of
this poem. I like it a great
deal.

Warmly,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Spiros Zafiris
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4 posted 2002-11-06 10:01 AM


..Sunshine../\..garysgirl../\..
+ regards2you../\..

..thank you for reading my poem; your
comments are most pleasing..


../\..Spiros

------------------------trees------

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-11-06 11:17 AM




(sigh) Oh Spiros, this is so well sad, sweet friend, I love the wonderful soothing tone of your words, this is spellbinding! (sigh) Trees keep promises as He does, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Spiros, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Spiros Zafiris
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6 posted 2002-11-06 12:37 PM


..Mistletoe Angel../\..thanks for reading my poem(s); you are most kind..

../\..Spiros

--------------------calm------

Enchantress
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7 posted 2002-11-06 02:40 PM


Very beautiful and Ooooh so calming.
Thank you for this.
~Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Spiros Zafiris
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8 posted 2002-11-06 06:23 PM


..Enchantress../\..thank you for taking the time to read my poem; i appreciate your kind comment.

../\..Spiros

----------------------trees--------

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