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Tonight |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
All the sky is clear tonight your warmth is on my chest. My arm around your waist is tight. Your lips at my behest. Your eyes are sleeping--so I see. Your breathing shallow is and you belong to only me. No need to steal a kiss. My mind is clear for once tonight no clouds have ruined its course and I am holding you real tight I the very first. And you are lying silently within my strong embrace and I would like the world to see my face so near your face. My eyes are troubled not tonight with mists that cause a spill and linger on your skin so white sometimes against my will. But if my will has lost tonight and made them languish there, I'll kiss you silently tonight though you be unaware. [This message has been edited by Radrook (11-06-2002 06:05 AM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Very beautiful. Just to watch our loved ones while they sleep is wonderful. I enjoyed this, thanks for sharing. |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
I like the part about a kiss given even when unawear.The whole poem was fine too. Thank you. etoodog |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Thanks you both for the feedback! Glad you enjoyed! God bless! |
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