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Radrook
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0 posted 2002-11-06 05:47 AM



On quiet nights,
when thoughts
careen through saddened minds
and sage and prophet
succumb to wondrous signs,

I envision myself
beneath
shrouded skies
where you
dispel
the
gloom
like a glorious morning star.


[This message has been edited by Radrook (11-06-2002 06:48 AM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-11-06 07:07 AM



Claiming this as a

garysgirl
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2 posted 2002-11-06 07:10 AM


Radrook, such talent shines through your work.
Thanks for sharing with us.

Love makes the world go 'round (unkown)
with love and hugs from Ethel
                  

Robert Adamson
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3 posted 2002-11-06 08:10 AM


You surprised me with a morning star and I'm appreciating the sight. Thank you.

etoodog

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4 posted 2002-11-06 08:41 AM


where you
dispel
the
gloom
like a glorious morning star.
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Lovely thought here..much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

regards2you
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5 posted 2002-11-06 09:17 AM



Aw.... I love this! The final lines were perfect...


Warm Regards,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Radrook
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6 posted 2002-11-06 02:23 PM


Thanks to all for the responses!
Glad you enjoyed the poem.
God bless!

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2002-11-07 04:14 AM


Excellent...James
Radrook
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8 posted 2002-11-07 04:25 AM


Glad you enjoyed the poem James!
God bless!

passing shadows
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9 posted 2002-12-26 02:58 AM


I've had many of those quiet nights. Peace.
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